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Harry Knight - Editor
Ben Hudson - Producer
Sunday, 5 February 2012
ALL - Feedback received
The Mag Ad feedback received was that it was overall very good. However elements such as the font used seemed unusual and not as varied as it could be.
Replace the URL's with just icons- they're generally familiar with everyone.
Good enigma / lack of exposition- it looks obscure and in keeping with the Nine Inch Nails '
The beware CCTV looks good and fits.
Framing of the candle seems to be good- fits with theme of the genre
Some of the blending between images (
the solid lines between them
The special effects worked
pace was good
good variation of shots
Some shots are on screen too long & are too jarring/ don't mesh well with the editing style.
Maybe even more enigma!
More could be done with the fire extinguisher (
loop to beat?
Shots of just the protagonists eyes would still maintain the enigma, or extreme close-ups.
Frames slipping would add to the damaged video effect.
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